I'll hope that you can post the Commentary on the site. I can't see how to - and I guess it's an administrator only thing. Please ensure that Robin's response (appended at the foot of the paper) is also posted - it's written ex cathedra so I'm sure that'll be fine.
Yes, it is a bit heavy - and please don't expect a continuous narrative. What I've done is to shadow the writer(s) of the Revised Proposal, no matter where they took me. You can see a lot of forest that way...

I'm happy for the commentary to travel far and wide. My simple

Oh, and reader? - please weigh and criticise my thoughts as much as I do Matlock's. (I am not a sensitive flower...) That way, we progress... "